Old material but amusing.

‘”1) The verse is not very melodic or interesting to me. I would like to hear more imagry in the Lyrics, and a smaller melodic range or at least a lower key that would better fit the singer’s natural voice. I feel the current key of the song detracts from the melody, lyrics, and the singer’s voice. I suggest transposing the song into a lower key that adds to the lyrics, and melody. It may assits them to stand out.
2) I believe the contrast between the chorus and the bridge is very identifiable. I know when the change occurs, or when the chorus stops, and the bridge begins.
3) The chorus would be more identifiable if the contrast between the Verse, and the chorus were improved. This may be accomplished by improving the imargry of the lyrics, changing the key of the song or at least the key between the Verse and the chorus. However, the contrast between the chorus and the bridge are very good. It is very Identifiable where the chorus stops , and the bridge begins.”